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Edith
Wharton is a storyteller who shows characters
trapped within a system. This is advanced storytelling
and the most challenging kind of fiction writing
you can do. Wharton is a master at showing that
the real currency in a close, hierarchical society
is status, not money.
But in The House of Mirth, Wharton makes the
deadly mistake found in much of advanced fiction:
creating a passive character. Lily Bart simply
reacts to the attacks of others around her.
Wharton compounds the mistake by making her
hero foolish. That means that the plot is stripped
of almost all turns. The hero is beaten on for
the entire story and then falls. But we've known
the final destructionwas coming for a long time.
About the only element of story interest here
is the fact that Lily's ultimate downfall is
caused by her own misplaced sense of right.
Terence Davies' adaptation makes the weaknesses
of Wharton's story worse. This film defines
slow. Wharton doesn't have to be this dull,
as The Age of Innocence proved. Here everything
is pounded into the ground.
Some important lessons: if you write about
characters within a system, make your hero active,
even if he or she fails to defeat the larger
system. Keep the scenes tight. And remember,
this is film, which uses the cut, and that means
that the juxtaposition of scenes is more important
than what is in any individual scene. The placement
of one scene before or after another should
create new information.
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