Script, July 1999:
"StoryBuilder returns to the tried and true idea that all stories rely on sound, dramatic structure principles." "StoryBuilder helps a screenwriter create well-rounded characters, settings, conflicts, and plot resolutions." "One of the program's most useful elements is its confrontation of common screenwriting and storytelling pitfalls." "The program offers close examinations of how to make truly vivid characters." "..Fully customizable and easy to use..."

Fiction Writer, July 1999:
"A means of organizing the infomation you need to write a fully realizable story." "As software, it's much slicker [than competive programs.]" "You'll have a good idea where you're going. There are also a number of tools you can use to check your progress." "...You can as easily use it to create a literary story as a mass-market one." "I prefer StoryBuilder and Writer's Blocks, as they organize your creativity, rather than channeling it through their philosophy."

Writing Tools, Columbia Herald, March 1999:
"StoryBuilder will be welcomed by fiction writers everywhere." "With this accesibile and immensely helpful software, you can give your stories and novels the strong structural foundations they need."

NovelAdvice Cyber Journal
"...StoryBuilder is straightforward and direct, full of practicality and wisdom" "Another great way to use this program is as a smart tutorial on fiction writing. ..It will really take you step by step through what you should have learned in college." "Your readers deserve a logically organized, well-crafter story. [StoryBuilder] really can help- by making you think through every decision you make about your story."

The Creativity Web, Charles Cave
"StoryBuilder lives up to its name as a design tool to assist the writer in developing the components of a piece of fiction, and checking the final concept."

Testimonials:

"For the first time, I have a complete outline of my novel that works!! StoryBuilder really helped me put that together... One thing that convinced me to try it was when I realized it was computer-aided design and not mixing and matching ideas and phrases. I work with engineers a lot on my 'real job' and I understand how invaluable CAD software is for their work. No one would attempt to design anything these days without it. So I thought, Yeah! That should work for "designing" stories too."
Joan Kremer

"From a non-believer, I rapidly became a convert to the cause of writing software. Outlining is not the most entertaining part of writing, and it's great to have a handy tool that helps me plan my story the way I want it. The writing goes so much faster and easier."
Melissa McCann

"StoryBuilder is a great little software package for helping fiction writers. I have it and use it. Easy to use and not too expensive." Dave Owens "Love the software, especially because I can customize it!"
Pamela Marks